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Thursday 17 August 2017

Narrative

One day Edith and her to granddaughters went for a walk to the garden. Edith was a beautiful old lady that wore maroon glasses.

As they were walking Edith noticed that she didn’t have her glasses with her. She continued to walk and as her granddaughters turned left to the gardens she took a right to the mysterious forest. She walked and noticed that her grandaughters weren’t with her. She looked all over for them. While Hiria and Hevani were looking at the flowers they looked at each other and said, “Where’s our grandma?”. They looked and looked until it was night.

Since they couldn’t find her they called the police and told them that their grandma is missing. “We’re find her we just need to look everywhere”. They got torches and looked so did grandma. Even though grandma couldn’t see she still tried to look. They looked and looked until they bumped into each other. “I was looking for use everywhere”, said grandma, “At least we found each other”, replied Hevani. They went to the gardens and had a great time.

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