Blog Commenting: Lily

Bula Vinaka and greetings to you all!

Today I will be doing a blog comment post. Today's version is... Lily! (Blog link)

The blog I will be commenting on is her 'Recount Weekend'

Here is the comment:

So, Lily is a person who strives to succeed. She is my cousin but she's more like a sister! She knows when to say something and what and what not to say! A few tips for her blog is to make sure she is consistently proofreading just to make sure everything is correct and she has no spelling errors. She can work on getting to add more explanation to her ideas. Other than that she is a FANTASTIC blog writer!

1. Always be positive

2. Always be clear when you are commenting (be specific, use words related to the topic etc.)

3. Think about what you say before you write anything down

4. Proofread to check that you have no spelling errors and that nothing is wrong

5. ALWAYS be POSITIVE