tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1482889030272990858.post1173909337920944042..comments2023-08-12T23:21:47.627+12:00Comments on Lydia B @ Tamaki Primary School: The Worst Spelling Test Ever!TPSBlogOwner4http://www.blogger.com/profile/00541767221376341453noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1482889030272990858.post-77268561768174500142017-02-20T16:44:29.642+13:002017-02-20T16:44:29.642+13:00Lydia this is a great recount, yes I know it was a...Lydia this is a great recount, yes I know it was a boring topic, but you have made it interesting by using adjectives, similes and dialogue (talking).<br />Next steps - don't use 'like' as a sentence starter, and maybe adding in who else was there (for example, my friend Hevani was sitting next to me, and I could tell she was bored too because of how she kept sighing). Ashley Schellingerhout (Miss Ashley)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10885496821769466351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1482889030272990858.post-86037146324013704962017-02-20T12:55:59.506+13:002017-02-20T12:55:59.506+13:00Hi dia, it is me Edith on you account.
Yes you are...Hi dia, it is me Edith on you account.<br />Yes you are right it was boring and you had an amazing story.By the way I have no feedforward for you but as I said your are amazing and Nice job for the very interesting words bye :D :D :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com