🖥️Cybersmart T3W3 - Writing a Quality Comment🖥️
IALHT: Write a Quality Blog Comment
Good Morning Everyone! Welcome to my blog. Today in Cybersmarts we learned how to construct a Quality Blog Comment.
This is how I constructed my Quality Blog Comment.
- Start with a Cultural Greeting
- If your a Y7 use 7 sentence starters.
- If your a Y8 use 8 sentence starters.
Example: I really appreciated...
I really enjoyed...
- End with a Cultural Farewell
Here is my Quality Blog Comment:
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I really enjoyed doing this task! I can't wait for next week's lesson with Ms Collins!
Question of the blog: Do you learn about Cybersmart? If so, what have you learnt so far?
Thank you for reading this blog! Make sure to give me some POSITIVE feedback and feedforward! Haera Ra :)
Hi there Lydia, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School, or YMS for short.
ReplyDeleteI really like that you have lots of eye catching pictures. It makes your blog look so cool.
This reminds me of all of my comments. I think they do all the things you described.
Next time you could explain what you were commenting on and other ways to improve our comments.
Is my comment up to your standerds?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Kia Ora Lydia, my name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteWow, this was amazing. You have a lot of information which is great and you start with a hello. What was your favourite part about this?
Next time to improve, you could you google slides maybe if you have more time.
Apart from that, amazing job.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School.
Hi Lydia!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mia and I am a year 7 from Yaldhurst Model School.
I love your blog post, it's very colorful and eye catching. I also like the way that you have explained clearly the instructions and the task that you were doing.
This reminds me when we were learning about it, how to write a quality comment. They said that the comment had to be at least 5 sentences long and have a positive, thoughtful and helpful.
To improve I think that you could've made it on something more creative like Canva, Visme, or even just slides.
Do you like commenting?
Awesome!
Mia
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