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Thursday, 3 November 2016

Reflection of PCW's Visit!











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  3. Hello Lydia,
    Im very impressed on you learning and how you detailed your day.I think you could work on your punctuation.I say this because as I read your reflection, it looks like their are no full stops and because you may need to read through it once again.Although, I think you have done well through this task, Keep it up.To acheive your goal, you could probably check and edit through it.

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    1. Hey Constance,
      Sorry about the full stops but I just wanted to say I do have full stops it's just the size of the text but anyways thanks for the feedback.

      Lydia

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  4. Hi Lydia,
    I like your work it really puts of what you did and I like how you put yours and Agnes separate, Make sure to check your punctuation, re-read your work, and make sure people can see it but overall great work.

    EDITH

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