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Sunday 25 November 2018

⛈️In The Moment...Hailstones⛈️

IALT: Freestyle write about Hailstones!
On Tuesday we were surprised with a visit from a Hailstorm. We were inspired to use our descriptive language to describe this moment. We were encouraged to include figurative language to describe the way we felt, what we heard and what we saw in any type of way! (Freestyle Writing) 



⛈️In the moment...Hailstones⛈️ 
The hailstones pour down like shattering glass,
Little white frozen peas fall down to the grass.
Hailstones come
 Big and small
They come mostly shaped
 Like a ball.

It gets so loud, as loud as can be
A tiny little hail storm, 
That's all I could see.
Followed by rain, it drips and it drops.
BOOM! The thunder joins and everyone has stopped!
Ripple, Rumble, Tap, Crash.
It sounds so loud, it makes a big splash.

First HAIL, 
And then RAIN, 
Next comes thunder 
It's hurting my brain!
Stopping kids from playing outside.
Avoiding the sun,
KEEPING OUT THE FUN!
Image result for hailstorm
In The Moment... Hailstones







  


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